Sunday, February 7, 2010

A PROMISE

It has been almost half an year since I created my blog ; but never wrote any post.All blames on my sheer laziness.Now I realize I should start writing sooner or later so, lets get it started........

would start by sharing a poem which I had written sometime back & it still is very close to my heart. Maybe because I have always wanted to be in such deep love as is the chap in this poem....


A Promise ;

I don't promise you a life with oozing comfort,
Neither can I promise you tickets of big celebrity concert,
I can't provide you with whatever Jaisy gets from Albert,
Those ultimately beautiful tank tops,snickers and skirt,
Even I am not the smartest guy like Robert,
I cant give you a candle light dinner with dessert,
Frankly I cant afford it, that's why people call me a Pervert,
But I can tell you something, I would put in my every effort,
To make you smile whenever you are down and hurt.


P.S. - It Feels refreshingly good to blog!!! :-) Hoping that I can continue writing

17 comments:

  1. hehe... nice nice!!
    good 2 c u bloggin..
    i hop i 2 mange 2 getovr my monsTer laziness sumday :P

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  2. grt work yaar ... :-)

    ya 'll find ya true love one day .. n tht's for sure... !

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  3. vry nice poem yaar....
    i love it ...
    tune likhi ki kahin or se chraai......
    ha ha keep it up..:).....

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  4. thank you all... thanks a ton :-)

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  5. heya manish......!
    very well written...

    bt u knw wt...
    after reading dis i felt u have sumthing more in ur heart wich u've not written in wrds and included in dis,.....!!
    bt itna bhi gud job....!

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  6. gr8 one mani, cnt gv uh ny comment as such!!!

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  7. good poem... temme have u penned it while being in love or did u romanticize the poem as how it would be in love?

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  8. Hi Mani,
    A good start...
    Welcome to being regular:-)
    The last line of the poem kinda makes up for it all:-)
    Hope to see u around:-)

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  9. damn nice poem! pervert wala sentence sahi tha :P

    me from shit for tat blog..i had written that post..
    ur that vella to write such a long comment? :O OMG!

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  10. n blog more!
    only 2 posts :O
    i thought u were vella :P

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  11. @Smarak sir,
    Love has been a concept too alien for me till now.. :D
    This is what I feel I would feel when I will be in that thing called love :)

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  12. @Suruchi ,
    Thanks a ton...
    yup , I hope last line will be one that counts ... :D
    Am just back and trying being regular... Pls catch me on my other blog
    www.devillishinnocence.blogspot.com :)

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  13. @Mads..
    Greetings..
    trust me, I define being vella these days ;)
    courtesy my college's controller of examination's community.
    I mean, who gives a week long holidays during exam? had last exam this 12th.. next on 18th :D


    and yup I will blog more and more.. thanks 4 the apprecition..
    I too love the vella wali line.. mast hai na..

    will look forward 4 ur comments on my new blog.. :)
    cheers...

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  14. loved that jaisy gets frm albert rhyme, last three lines though steal the show, no surprise that this poem is so close to ur heart..enticng

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